首段开个好头
第一段四个句子。第一句宏观描述图画，并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思;第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果;第三句是主题句，谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性，并引发思考;第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。
① As isvividly depicted in the picture, which seems to be humorous and ridiculous butthought-provoking on second thoughts.
② Themost striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably,
③ Recentfew years has witnessed a phenomenon of which seemsto be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.
④ Thisphenomenon of should be condemned severely or madeillegal.
中间段落
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势。
第二段七个句子。首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因;第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害，用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子，通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性;第三个句子谈第二个危害，用一个豪华级的比较级的句子，让老师耳目一新，通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害;第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害;第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文;第六个句子是例子群体的出现，谈根据一项调查表明，80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害;最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子，谈一下预测趋势，表明这种现象再这样下去，就会导致恶劣的结果出现，甚至是毁灭性的后果。
① To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward.
② To begin with,not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
③ In addition, nothing is more harmful than to contradict with a harmonious society.
④ Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.
⑤ No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below .
⑥ According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.
⑦ If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
末尾段落
第三段六个句子。第一个句子是下个结论，谈解决问题的必要性;第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象;第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟，关于这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟;第四个句子谈个谚语，谈一下实践我的建议的重要性;第五个句子谈解决的任重道远;第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。
① From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent.
② On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something.
③ On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction.
④ However,it is easier said than done.
⑤ Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.
⑥ Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
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