满分范文
Dear Friends,
As most of you have already known, Yang Guo is seriously ill in hospital and needs help badly. The Students' Union has decided to call upon all students on campus to help with the money for his medical treatment.
Please donate as much as you can. Unless we can raise sufficient money, Yang Guo will not be able to afford the necessary treatment. As the local hospital is poorly equipped, he needs to be transferred to a hospital in Beijing to have an operation.
As his schoolmates, we should show our love to him by donating money to assist in his speedy recovery. Please contribute generously.
The Students' Union
参考译文
亲爱的朋友们:
大多数人已经知道了,杨过同学因重病住院,急需大家的帮助。学生会决定号召所有在校学生帮助筹集他的医疗费。
请大家尽己所能捐款。只有我们筹到足够的钱,杨过同学才能负担得起必要的治疗。因为本地医院的医疗条件有限,他需要转到北京的医院做手术。
作为杨过的同学,我们应该慷慨解囊助他早日康复,以此来表达对他的关爱。请大家慷慨捐款。
学生会
道长点评
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素材词汇和短语
seriously 严重地
in hospital 住院
badly 非常
the Students' Union 学生会
call upon 号召
medical treatment 医疗
donate 捐献(尤指钱)
raise 募集
sufficient 足够的
necessary 必要的
transfer 转移
operation 手术
schoolmate 同学
speedy 迅速的
contribute 贡献
generously 慷慨地
亮点表达
〔1〕help with... 帮助做......
〔2〕assist in 协助,帮助
佳句拓展
1 As President of the Students' Union, I am calling on all students to donate as much as you can to help him.
作为学生会主席,我号召全体同学对他倾囊相助。
2 Specialized treatment is available at a private clinic in Beijing, but it is very expensive.
北京的一家私人诊所可以提供专门治疗,但费用很高。
3 His parents are not well off so any money we can contribute towards his treatment will be of great help.
他家庭并不富裕,因此不管我们能捐多少治疗费都会有很大帮助。