例句：

In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learnknowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything.

改句：

In order to live a happy(wonderful) life, it is becoming increasingly important for people toacquire knowledge well, for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world.

【解析】

首先我们看到原句中出现了more and more，在四六级作文中，它可算是常客，对阅卷老师而言，不具任何吸引力，而且有落入俗套的危险哦，所以在我们把它用一个简单的副词来替代，副词修饰形容词，相信会令人感觉眼前一亮。

其次，我们还要注意一个搭配问题，原句中的learn knowledge是明显的中式英语，很多同学会误用，正确的搭配应该是acquire knowledge。

最后，我们有余力可以把句子通过从句进行相连，使句子看起来更有结构感。

下面大家一起来试试吧！

1.China is developing very fast in recent years.

答案：

China is highly developed in recent years.