作文点评：本文主要是要讨论自动取款机的利弊，写出自己的观点。

　　作文题目：论自动提款机

　　On the Use of the ATM

　　1. 现在人们使用自动取款机存取钱比较普遍

　　2. 使用自动取款机给人们带来很多方便，但也有其弊端

　　3. 你的建议

　　ATM is not fresh to city residents. You can find at least one such machine in banks. And now, it is spreading in most rural areas of China. It is a common phenomenon for people to withdraw or deposit money through the ATM.

　　对于城市居民来说自动取款机并不新鲜。你可以在银行找到至少一个这样的机器。现在，它已经像中国大部分农村地区蔓延。人们通过自动取款机取款或存钱是一种常见的现象。

　　ATM has helped both bank clerks and their customers greatly. For one thing, it partly frees the clerks from heavy work. For another thing, it provides customers with more speedy and around-the-clock service. But, ATM can be imperfect. First of all, you can’t withdraw as much money as you want. Five thousand Yuan is the maximum sum you can get daily. Secondly, there are risks for customers who withdraw money from ATM. They may suffer losses from theft, robbery or their own carelessness.

　　自动取款机帮助银行职员和他们的客户。一方面，它把工作人员从繁重的工作中解放了。另一方面，它为客户提供更快捷的时钟服务。但是，自动取款机是不完美的。首先，你不能收回你想要的钱。五千元是你每天可以得到的最高金额。第二，客户从自动取款机上取款是有风险的。他们可能遭受的损失，盗窃，抢劫或自己的疏忽。

　　I think the following tips can avoid most troubles. First, withdraw a large sum of money through bank clerk service. Secondly, make sure the place where ATM was installed is safe enough. Thirdly, keep secret of password and remember to get your card back. Finally, get a companion when you use ATM at night.

　　我认为以下的建议可以避免大部分的麻烦。首先，通过银行业务员的服务取回一大笔钱。其次，确保安装了自动取款机的地方是安全的。第三，输入密码是要注意遮盖，并记得要取回自己的卡。最后，当你在晚上使用自动取款机时，找个同伴。

　　词汇学习：

　　fresh：英 [freʃ] 美 [frɛʃ]

　　adj.新鲜的; 新的; 淡水的; 无经验的;　adv.刚; 最新的;　n.开始; 新生; 泛滥; 淡水流; 　　比较级：fresher 最高级：freshest　相关单词： Fresh

　　[例句]I feel I is fresh air need.

　　我感到我是新鲜空气需要。

　　city residents：市民;

　　rural areas of China ：中国农村

　　withdraw or deposit money through the ATM ：通过自动取款机取钱或存钱

　　around-the-clock service：昼夜不停; 连续一整天; 全天候;昼夜不断地