1. 题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述,在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题(这样的描述可以自己控制,如果第一段落字数单薄,可以适当使描述具体化)。
2. 在第一步的基础上给出观点,观点视文章主旨可以分为:个人观点(包括方法、途径),和多方观点(观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述;在交待观点是需要有原因和支持)。
3.个人观点总结点题(同意异表),简要指出方法途径,如果找不到具体的解决方法,则将话讲得圆滑(如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突,则可以融合)。
A 1995.1 my view on the negative effects of some advertisements
社会上的广告现象越来越多,很多的广告对我们的社会有不良的影响-〉(广告如何多:路边大型广告,报纸一半是广告,电线杆上垃圾广告,电视商业广告频繁。)
Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much ofnewspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. Howeverpervasive they are, (尽管他们四处充斥)they always produce a negative influence.
从观点的多个层次描写:1.白日抢劫——卖家通过弯曲夸大事实来欺骗消费者购买(化妆品);2.种下不良消费习惯或者价值观(香烟);3.污染环境(牛皮癣和校园商业海报)。
To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence (白日抢劫每天都在发生)as aresult of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and distort/ignore thefacts.(夸大功能,歪曲事实) Every means is tried to hook people into buying(为了诱导人们消费,不择手段). Make-up promotion is a typical case in point.(化妆品促销就是一个典型的例子)Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind (在脑海中植下)of consumers, especially youngpeople, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further thancigarette selling. (香烟销售就是一个典型的例子)Ads with the image of a smoking pop starbroadcast an irresistible message.(传递无法抗拒的信息) Last but not least, easily-printed postersand handouts have polluted our environment