六级高分作文_困惑越多,收获越多
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     困惑越多,收获越多

    Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then explain how you understand it . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

    审题立意

    1. 导语解读:要求考生根据漫画的内容就“知识越多,困惑越多”这一话题进行简述,并阐述“困惑越多,收获的知识越多”的观点。

    2. 漫画解读:一个人正捧着一本书,认真地阅读着。在他的脚下,是一段由问号搭建起来的阶梯。图片说明文字为:困惑越多,收获的知识越多。

    3. 文章立意:知识是无限的。在社会的进步中,随时都会产生新知识、新技术,同时也会遇到新知识带来的困惑。因此,我们不能因为困惑的产生就停止追求知识的脚步。相反,困惑越多,收获的知识越多。

    写作思路

    1. 第一段简要描述漫画及注解文字。

    2. 第二段就图画内容提出个人论点:困惑越多,收获的知识越多。

    3. 第三段围绕观点展开论述。

    参考范文

    As depicted in the picture, a man is absorbed in reading a thick book while climbing long stairs composed of question marks under his feet. In addition, the caption below says, “The more doubts you get, the more knowledge you gain.” 1

    From my perspective, the message implied in the picture is that it is knowledge that equips us with power to doubt the world, during which we resolve doubts and then gain more knowledge. 2 Simply put, the more doubts we have, the more knowledge we gain. 3

    Knowledge is infinite, which inspires generations of people to study. Therefore, study is one of the most commonplace things in the world, especially in such an internationally communicative and competitive era. The development and advancement of society gives rise to abundant new knowledge and technologies that we may not understand. However, humans never stop exploring new fields just because of the appearance of new knowledge. Therefore, knowledgeable and competent people always learn how to study deeply in the field in which he will be involved and thus make progress and achieve great success. 4

    如图所示,一个人一边全神贯注地阅读一本厚书,一边在爬由很多问号组成的长楼梯。此外,图片下方的说明文字写道:“困惑越多,收获的知识越多。”

    依我之见,图中暗含的信息是,知识赋予我们质疑世界的能力,在质疑的过程中我们解决问题,然后获得更多的知识。简单地说,我们的困惑越多,我们获取的知识也会越多。

    知识是无穷尽的,这也激励着世世代代的人们去学习。因此,学习是世界上最平凡的事情之一,尤其是在当今这个交流和竞争趋于国际化的时代。社会的发展和进步使得大量我们可能不了解的知识和技术涌现而出。然而,人们不会因为新知识的出炉而停下探索新领域的脚步。因此,有知识和有能力的人通常会学习如何在他将涉及的领域进行深度的学习并借此进步,做出伟大的成就。

    范文点评

    1. 开篇简要描述图片及文字的内容。

    2. 自然过渡,结合图片及文字内容准确传达出这幅漫画的寓意,紧扣作文话题。

    3. 明确表达自己的观点:困惑越多,收获的知识越多。

    4. 论证自己的观点,论证有力。

    要点用法

    be absorbed in 专心于;全神贯注于

    be composed of 由……组成

    equip …with 用……装备……

    commonplace adj. 平凡的

    competitive adj. 竞争的

    era n. 时代;年代

    abundant adj. 丰富的;大量的

    knowledgeable adj. 知识渊博的

    句法点评

    1. The more doubts you get, the more knowledge you gain.

    此句使用了“the +比较级,the +比较级”的结构,意为“越……就越……”。

    2. Therefore, knowledgeable and competent people always learn how to study deeply in the field in which he will be involved and thus make progress and achieve great success.

    此句用到了“介词+ which”引导的定语从句,体现了句式的多样化。

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