网上购物VS实体店购物
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Shopping Online VS Shopping In-Store . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
Generally speaking, going shopping offers you a leisure time and an enjoyable experience, but it is time-consuming and energy-demanding.
Shopping online is much more convenient but less enjoyable because you cannot see or try on what you buy in person.
Which one do you prefer? Why?
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据提纲的内容就“在网上购物还是到实体店购物”这一话题进行简述，并解释。
2. 文章立意：实体店购物和网上购物各有利弊，而我更喜欢实体店购物。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述客观事实：网购越来越受青睐。
2. 第二段通过对比论证的方式阐述网上购物和实体店购物各自的利弊。
3. 第三段提出自己的观点：实体店购物才是最本真的购物方式。
参考范文
Shopping Online VS Shopping In-Store
With the arrival of digital age, shopping online is becoming more and more popular, especially among young people. 1
As far as I can see, there are some advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. 2 On the one hand 3 , it has some great advantages, of which the most important one is convenience. The goods come in all shapes, sizes, and colors on the Internet, and all people need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouse. Besides, online goods are really cheap and help save much money sometimes, especially during holidays. On the other hand 3 , the disadvantages of shopping online cannot be ignored. The real goods may not be the same as what they look like online. To make matters worse, we are likely to buy some fake goods since some shops on the Internet are not formally registered.
Personally, I prefer shopping in-store to shopping online. 4 The most important reason is that I can have a leisure time and enjoy myself most when I go shopping with the company of my friends. In the meanwhile, I can feel and try on anything I want to buy and see the effect of clothing worn on my body in physical clothes stores.
网上购物VS实体店购物
随着数字化时代的到来，网上购物越来越受欢迎，尤其是受到年轻人的青睐。
据我了解，网购既有利也有弊。一方面，网购有一些巨大优势，其中最大的好处在于方便。人们只需要坐在电脑前，点一下鼠标，就能从网上买到各种形状、不同尺寸和颜色的商品。其次，网上商品有时候确实很便宜，能省很多钱，尤其是在节假日期间。而另一方面，网上购物的弊端也不容忽视。实际商品有可能与网上展示的商品不符。更糟糕的是，由于有些网上商店可能不是正规注册的，这就使得我们有可能买到一些假货。
就我而言，比起网上购物，我更喜欢到实体店购物。最重要的原因是我可以和朋友们一起购物、休闲，这种时候是最让人心情放松的。还有，当我到实体服装店购物时，我可以触摸并试穿，还能看到效果。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述客观事实：网上购物越来越流行。
2. 自然过渡，引出网上购物的好处和坏处，紧扣作文话题。
3. 采用对比论证的方法，恰如其分，同时也体现了论证方法的多样性。
4. 末段表明自己的观点：更喜欢实体店购物。
要点用法
digital adj. 数字的
click v. 点击
mouse n. 鼠标
ignore v. 忽视
fake adj. 伪造的，假的
register v. 注册
company n. 陪同，陪伴
句法点评
1. To make matters worse, we are likely to buy some fake goods since some shops on the Internet are not formally registered.
这句话中使用了to make matters worse这个不定式短语，表示“更糟糕的是”，同时还使用了be likely to这个短语，意为“有可能……”。
2. The most important reason is that I can have a leisure time and enjoy myself most when I go shopping with the company of my friends.
本句是表达“最重要的原因是……”的常用句式；with the company of意为“在……的陪伴下”。
