Writing 2 [上海市高三英语二模(徐汇区) ]假设你叫李华,暑假期间打算去英国Star English Language School(SELS)进行短期学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读课表,按表格下面的中文提示给校方回复一封信。信的开头已给出。
SELS Summer English Courses
信中必须包括:1.简单介绍你的情况;2.你的选择及理由;3.对该课程的要求和建议。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for inviting me to the summer English course in your school.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for inviting me to the summer English course in your school.As a Senior Three student,I feel it necessary to go abroad for further study as I think.I've been doing a great job in high school,and therefore I really appreciate this opportunity for me to actually learn something new and have a better command of what I've learnt.
Speaking of the courses,I would like to choose the 6-week one for its lower expenses and the flexibility it offers.As the summer vacation lasts unfortunately only two months,the 6-week course provides me with some time to rest and prepare for my new semester in an entirely new school.Moreover,the course takes the form of tour,which I believe can get me closer to the real life and culture in Britain,and I regard broadening my horizons as my first priority,making this approach more appealing to me.The relaxation I can get through the tour also catches my eye.
However,in my humble opinion,the course can still change for the better.Though the time is relatively limited,I still think a part-time job is a necessity,because the real-life experience it offers always does more good than harm.Furthermore,I think the study hours can be cut so that we can learn more things beyond the books and gain real knowledge.
I'm really honored and looking forward to the courses this summer.Thank you again.
Truly yours,
Li Hua