Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Finally,I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether,which is the last thing parents would want.

　　两句话，作者的态度很明确，学生不可能花所有的时间去学习，否则就会完全失去对学习的兴趣，所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。

　　二、回答问题

　　When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’,in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology,because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

　　这个结尾段落明确地提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。

　　三、不要添加新的信息

　　Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

　　Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?Like self-awareness，this is also very difficult to achieve’but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

　　用一句话明确自己的观点，幸福很难定义，可能有两个因素起到作用。