托福写作病句的改造
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      1). 破碎句

      所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。

      破碎句:She singing alone. (无谓语,singing是现在分词)

      正确句:She is singing alone.

      破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

      正确句:He did not come because he was sick.

      2).接连句

      所谓接连据,就是两个句子直接连在一起,既未使用连词,也未使用正确的标点符号。

      接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

      正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

      正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

      3).句子连接不正确

      所谓句子连接不正确,就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。

      不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

      正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

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