Describe an expensive activity .
You should say :
What it is ?
How much you pay for it ?
Whom you do it with ?
Why you like to do it ?
高分参考：
1.I ‘d like to talk about an expensive outdoor activity , which I often play in my leisure time. skiing’s an exciting sport .It’s quite popular in my country . There are some professional skiing resorts , where young people may have fun . I started to play it when I was in high school .At that time , a friend of mine took me to a ski resort .I was fascinated by it .You know , it’s more like the love at the first sight .
2.Compared with other outdoor activities ,it’s quite expensive. I normally pay 1000 for it , which includes : the instruction fee , the rent for some equipment , and the necessary expense on life insurance. Some people may argue that ‘s quite expensive for sports .But if you really love it , you don’t care about how much you pay for it . I ‘m that type of person that lives the moment .
3.People I usually do it with are a group of old friends.We’re about the same age ,and share the same value and common hobbies . You know, we all love skiing , and like to pursue the excitement .so from time to time , we ‘d go tosome ski resorts for fun .
4.I love it because it brings enormous excitement . I love speed and like to challenge myself . When I ski , I need to totally concentrate on it . It doesn’t allow me to have any distraction . That really helps me get rid of stress in my life and brings me the freedom even just for a few minutes .That’s why I like it so much .
Thanks for your time .
高分语料解析：
1. I ‘d like to talk about an expensive outdoor activity , which I often play in my leisure time: 高分开头
2. There are some professional skiing resorts , where young people may have fun：有一些好的适合年轻人玩耍的滑雪圣地
3. I started to play it when I was in high school .At that time , a friend of mine took me to a skiing resort .I was fascinated by it：我在高中就开始玩这项运动了。那个时候一个朋友带我去了一个滑雪场。我一下子就迷上了这项运动。
4. Compared with other outdoor activities ,it’s quite expensive: 和其他的户外运动相比， 滑雪是太贵了。
5. I normally pay 1000 for it , which includes : the instruction fee , the rent for some equipment , and the necessary expense on life insurance: 一次一般在1000元左右， 其中包括了指导费用， 装备的租凭费用， 还有在人生保险上的花费。
6. I ‘m that type of person that lives the moment:我是那种活在当下的人
7. People I usually do it with are a group of old friends:和我经常去玩的那些人都是我的老朋友。
8. We’re about the same age ,and share the same value and common hobbies:我们年龄相仿， 有相同的人生观还有很多共同的爱好。
9. I love it because it brings enormous excitement:我喜欢滑雪是因为这项运动能给我带来巨大的刺激。
10. When I ski , I need to totally concentrate on it . It doesn’t allow me to have any distraction :当我在滑雪的时候， 我会全神贯注。它不允许我有任何的分心。
11. That really helps me get rid of stress in my life and brings me the freedom even just for a few minutes: 而那种专注让我从我生活的压力中解脱出来， 给我带来了片刻的自由。
