①Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.②The student who wrote "The A&P as a State of Mind" wisely dropped a paragraph that questioned whether Sammy displays chauvinistic attitudes toward women.③Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy's decision to quit his job.④Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel's crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A&P "policy" he enforces.

　　【高频考点】

　　1.完成初稿：you have a first draft on paper

　　2.必要的阐释你的观点的材料：material necessary to illustrate your points

　　3.使你的论文更有说服力：make your paper convincing

　　4.对女性表现出大男子主义：display chauvinistic attitudes toward women

　　5.与论文无关：have nothing to do with the thesis

　　6.对女孩的乖戾反应：crabbed response to the girls

　　7.他执行的A&P"政策"the A&P "policy" he enforces

　　【翻译练习】

　　①Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.

　　结构提示：两个小括号里的内容充当后置定语。

　　②The student who wrote "The A&P as a State of Mind" wisely dropped a paragraph that questioned whether Sammy displays chauvinistic attitudes toward women.

　　③Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy's decision to quit his job.

　　④Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel's crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A&P "policy" he enforces.

　　【参考译文】

　　①一旦完成初稿，你就可以删除那些与论文不想关的材料，同时增加必要的阐释论文观点的材料，使它更有说服力。

　　②一位写题为《A&P：一种心理状态》的文章的学生明智地删掉了一段质疑萨米对女孩子表现出大男子主义的文字。

　　③尽管这个观点很有趣，但与论文无甚关联，因为论文旨在解释背景怎样影响萨米做出辞职的决定。

　　④作者没有把这段写进论文，而是增加了一段文字，描写伦格尔对女孩的乖戾反应，并由此得出他执行的A&P"政策"。