满分范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a third-year student majoring in history at Beijing Normal University. I'm writing to seek your assistance to finance my fourth year's course.
In the fourth year, studying will be my priority and I will have to cut back on part-time jobs off campus. That is why I seek your help through a student loan.
I am still not clear about the conditions for applying for a student loan. Could you please send me the details about repayments, lending rates and duration? Many thanks for considering my request.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
尊敬的先生/女士:
我是北京师范大学历史专业的一名大三学生。我写信想请求您的帮助--资助我完成大四的课程。
到了大四,我要以学习为重,因此不得不减少校外的兼职工作。这就是为什么我向您寻求帮助,申请助学贷款。
我对申请助学贷款的条件还不太了解。您能发给我有关分期还款额、贷款利率和期限的细节吗?非常感谢考虑我的请求。
您真诚的,
李明
道长点评
申请信首段一般进行自我介绍,表明写作目的;次段展开提纲,进行合理引申;末段可以表示感谢,并期待回信。
素材词汇和短语
major in 专业是
finance 资助
course 课程
part-time job 兼职工作
off campus 校外
student loan 助学贷款
condition 条件
detail 细节
repayment 还款额
lending rate 贷款利率
duration 持续时间
佳句拓展
1 The dean of our department has recommended that I apply to your organization for a student loan to cover my living expenses and university fees for my final year.
我们系主任推荐我向贵组织申请助学贷款,用于支付我大学最后一学年的学费和生活费。
2 In previous years, I have paid my way by doing part-time jobs but this will not be possible in my senior year.
在过去的几年里,我一直靠兼职来自食其力,但到了大四就不可能这样了。
3 Could you tell me the conditions for receiving student loans?
您能告知获得助学贷款的条件吗?