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    Dear Sir or Madam,

    On January 4, I bought a mobile phone at your store in Wangfujing Street. After using it for a short period of time, I had quite a few problems with it.

    Although I was initially pleased with the phone, I quickly changed my mind. To begin with, the battery needs recharging after a mere 4 hours of use. This means that I need to carry my charger with me for a day out. In addition, the buttons on the phone are so small that it is inconvenient to type text messages. Most importantly, it is difficult to hear people on the phone.

    Therefore, I would like to either change the phone for another model or get a refund for the phone. Your help in this matter is greatly appreciated.

    Yours sincerely,

    Li Ming

    参考译文

    尊敬的先生/女士:

    1月4日,我在你们的王府井大街分店买了一部手机。没用多长时间,手机就出现了一些问题。

    虽然我最初对手机非常满意,但很快就改主意了。首先,电池只用了4小时便需要充电。这意味着,如果我外出一天的话,需要随身携带充电器。而且,手机按键太小,敲短信不方便。最重要的是,打电话的时候很难听清对方讲话。

    因此,我要求店家给我换一个型号或者给我退款。若您能帮助处理这件事,我将非常感谢。

    您真诚的,

    李明

    道长点评

    投诉信的末段应提出解决方案,无需展开,但要公平公正、体现礼貌原则;还要适当感谢对方的关注。

    素材词汇和短语

    mobile phone 手机

    initially 最初

    be pleased with... 对......满意

    recharge 充电

    mere 仅仅的

    charger 充电器

    button 按键

    type 输入

    text message 短信

    model 型号

    refund 退款

    佳句拓展

    1 We would like to draw your attention to something you have obviously failed to notice.

    我们希望引起你对某事的注意,显然你未能及时发现该问题。

    2 We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.

    我们相信你现在会认真考虑这件事,并努力避免类似事情的再次发生。

    3 If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would complain to the Consumers' Association.

    此事若不能妥善解决,我要求你给我退款,否则我就会向消费者协会投诉。

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