On College Students' Establishing Their Own Business

Recently the government has issued some preferential policies to encourage college students to establish their own business. One main part of the reason is that the current economical crisis breaks the normal economical activities. The other main reason is that the job supply can not meet the need of more and more students.

Due to these reasons, the government encourages students to establish their own business. On the one hand, it can alleviate the employment pressure. On the other hand, it can shape students' capability of independence and creativity. However, it also brings about problems. For one thing, the students are lack of life experience, not to mention the working experience. Thus, the success rate is very low. For another, few of the students can establish their own business because of various internal and external conditions.

As far as I am concerned, the aim of the government is good, but the realistic conditions should be taken into consideration. Apart from the preferential policies, the government should take action to help the students establish their own business. (176 words)

结构剖析

文章分为三段

第一段指出主题是讨论大学生自主创业，并列出了政策鼓励大学生创业的两个原因。

第二段写出了政府鼓励大学生创业对学生的影响以及带来的两个问题。

第三段是作者观点的阐述，希望政府除了优惠政策以外，可以采取实际行动帮助学生自主创业。

谈大学生自主创业

最近政府已颁布了一些优惠政策鼓励大学生创业。一部分主要原因在于，当前经济危机扰乱了正常的经济活动。另一部分主要原因是，学生越来越多，工作岗位的供给已无法满足他们的需求。

出于上述原因，政府鼓励学生自主创业。一方面，这可以减轻政府的压力。另一方面，也能塑造学生的自主和创新能力。然而，它也会带来一些问题。其一，学生缺乏生活经验，更不用谈工作经验。如此一来，成功的几率十分渺茫。其二，因为种种内部与外部条件，很少有学生能够成功创业。

在我看来，政府的初衷是好的，但也应考虑现实条件。除了优惠政策外，政府应该采取更多行动来帮助学生创业。

preferential policies 优惠政策

alleviate v. 减轻，缓解

employment pressure 就业压力

bring about 造成，引起

not to mention 更不要说......

internal adj. 内部的，国内的

external adj. 外部的;外表的

as far as I am concerned 就我所知

take into consideration 把......考虑在内

take action 采取行动

1. Recently the government has issued some preferential policies to encourage college students to establish their own business. 最近政府已颁布了一些优惠政策鼓励大学生创业。

2. On the one hand, it can alleviate the employment pressure. On the other hand, it can shape students' capability of independence and creativity. 一方面，这可以减轻政府的压力。另一方面，也能塑造学生的自主和创新能力。

3. The students are lack of life experience, not to mention the working experience. Thus, the success rate is very low.

学生缺乏生活经验，更不用谈工作经验。如此一来，成功的几率十分渺茫。

4. As far as I am concerned, the aim of the government is good, but the realistic conditions should be taken into consideration. 在我看来，政府的初衷是好的，但也应考虑现实条件。