托福写作点睛技巧之名词化句子
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      名词化句子有什么优势?

      曾有人说过,老外眼中句子分为3个档次,最差的是主动句,较好的是被动句、倒装句等,最好的是nominalization(名词化)的句子,因为这样的句子最学术最适合写论文。

      所以,如果在托福写作中,如果能见到一些名词化的句子,必将为自己的托福写作冲刺高分带来帮助。

      什么是名词化?

      简单说,名词化即是动词或形容词被用作名词的现象。

      比如动词转成名词:discovery→discovery, move→movement, refuse→refusal;

      比如形容词转成名词:careless→carelessness, difficult→difficulty, intense→intensity。

      什么情况下,我们需要句子名词化?

      1. 谓语动词的宾语部分

      原句:I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.

      名词化:I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.

      2. 结合被动形式

      原句:If people decide without enough persuasive information,...

      名词化:If a decision is made without enough persuasive information,...

      3. 取代诸如从句中“the fact that”的用法

      原句:The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.

      名词化:My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.

      更好的名词化:

      a. When I denied his accusations,I impressed the jury.

      b. In denying his accusations,I impressed the jury.

      4. 名词化部分用在there is/are的后面

      原句:We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.

      名词化:There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.

      原句:The floods considerably eroded the land.

      名词化:There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.

      哪些是毫无意义的名词化?

      这些我们在托福写作中认为应当使用的名词化,其实是没必要的:

      1. 名词化部分跟在动词后面

      原句:The police conducted an investigation into the matter.

      改后:The police investigated the matter.

      2. 名词化部分作为主语

      原句:Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.

      改后:We discussed a tax cut.

      3. 连续进行名词化

      原句:

      a. First,she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.

      b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.

      改后:First,she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.

      4. 连接部分名词化

      原句:Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.

      改后:They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.

      原句:The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.

      改后:Even though the motor housing was unstable,the research staff completed the field trials.

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