英语四级改错例题:沟通方式
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    在英语四级学习的道路上,改错练习是提升语言准确性不可或缺的一环。通过仔细审查并修正句子中的错误,我们不仅能加深对英语语法的理解,还能提高写作和表达的准确性。下面,让我们一起进入今天的英语四级改错练习。

    原文
     
    With the develop of technology, the way we communicate have changed dramatically. People are now more likely to send messages online than write letters. However, some people argue that this is a negative trend, and that writing letters is more effective way to communicate. In my opinion, I disagree with this.
    随着科技的发展,我们的交流方式发生了巨大变化。现在,人们更倾向于在网上发送信息,而不是写信。然而,有些人认为这是一种消极的趋势,写信才是更有效的交流方式。我不同意这种观点。
     
    Firstly, writing letters can be slow and inefficient. It takes a long time to write a letter, and then even longer for it to be delivered. Compare to emails, letters are slower and less convenient.
    首先,写信速度慢、效率低。写一封信要花很长时间,送信的时间更长。与电子邮件相比,写信更慢、更不方便。
     
    Secondly, letters are not as easy to store and organize as emails. You can easily search for emails by key words, but you have to manually search through letters if you want to find something. Last but not least, writing letters requires a lot of effort. You need to find paper, pens, envelopes, and stamps, which are all expensive. In conclusion, I believe that emails are a better way to communicate.
    其次,信件不像电子邮件那样易于存储和整理。你可以很容易地通过关键词搜索电子邮件,但如果你想找东西,就必须手动搜索信件。最后但并非最不重要的一点是,写信需要花费大量精力。你需要找纸、笔、信封和邮票,这些都很昂贵。总之,我认为电子邮件是更好的沟通方式。
     
    答案解析
     
    1.错误:With the develop of technology
    更正:With the development of technology
    解析:此处“develop”是动词,表示“发展”,而这里需要的是一个名词形式,表示“发展”的状态或过程,所以应该使用“development”。
     
    2.错误:the way we communicate have changed dramatically
    更正:the way we communicate has changed dramatically
    解析:主语“the way we communicate”是第三人称单数,所以动词“have”应该改为“has”。
     
    3.错误:and that writing letters is more effective way to communicate
    更正:and that writing letters is a more effective way to communicate
    解析:在“more effective way”前缺少不定冠词“a”,表示“一种更有效的方式”。
     
    4.错误:In my opinion, I disagree with this
    更正:In my opinion, I disagree with this view
    解析:为了使表达更明确,可以添加“view”或“argument”等词,指明不同意的是哪种观点或论点。
     
    5.错误:Compare to emails, letters are slower and less convenient
    更正:Compared to emails, letters are slower and less convenient
    解析:“compare to”是动词短语,而在这里需要的是一个形容词短语作状语,所以应使用“compared to”的形式。
     
    6.错误:You can easily search for emails by key words
    更正:You can easily search for emails by keywords
    解析:“key words”在这里指的是多个关键词,而“keywords”是一个单词,用来泛指关键词,更符合语境。
     
    7.错误:which are all expensive
    更正:which are all expensive items
    解析:为了使句子意思更完整,可以添加“items”来明确指的是纸、笔、信封和邮票这些物品都很贵。
     
    以上就是英语四级改错示例,在英语四级备考中,需要保持持续的学习和练习,不断提高自己的英语能力。
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