英语四级改错例题:动物园
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    在英语四级学习的道路上,改错练习是提升语言准确性不可或缺的一环。通过仔细审查并修正句子中的错误,我们不仅能加深对英语语法的理解,还能提高写作和表达的准确性。下面,让我们一起进入今天的英语四级改错练习。

    原文

    I often went to the zoo in my childhood. It was a place full of wonders for me. There was a variety of animals, such as lions, tigers, elephants and much more. I remember the time I saw a baby elephant for the first time. It was so cute and tiny that I felt like hug it. I also remember the time I watched a lion roaring loudly, which was really impressive. Besides, the zoo keeper always told us interesting facts about the animals. I had learned a lot from him. But the most memorable thing about the zoo was the ride on the elephant. It was a once-in-a-lifetime experience which I will never forget.

    文章概要

    这篇文章描述了作者童年时经常去的一个动物园,以及在那里的一些难忘的经历。文章详细叙述了动物园里的各种动物、第一次看见小象的情景、狮子咆哮的震撼、饲养员讲述的有趣事实,以及最难忘的骑大象的经历。

    答案解析

    错误1:I often went to the zoo in my childhood.
    更正: I often went to the zoo when I was a child.
    解析:原文中“in my childhood”在语法上不是非常准确,更常见的表达是“when I was a child”。

    错误2:I felt like hug it.
    更正:I felt like hugging it.
    解析:like在这里是介词,后面应该接名词或动名词,所以应该用hugging。

    错误3:I also remember the time I watched a lion roaring loudly, which was really impressive.
    更正:I also remember the time when I watched a lion roaring loudly, which was really impressive.
    解析:这是一个定语从句的错误,缺少了关系词when,使得句子结构不完整。

    错误4:the zoo keeper
    更正:the zookeeper
    解析:zoo keeper不是一个常见的词组,更常见的表达是zookeeper,即“饲养员”。

    错误5:I had learned a lot from him.
    更正:I learned a lot from him.
    解析:文章主要描述的是过去的情况,没有明确的过去完成时(had done)使用的背景,因此用一般过去时learned即可。

    错误6:But the most memorable thing about the zoo was the ride on the elephant.
    更正:The most memorable thing about the zoo was the ride on an elephant.
    解析:elephant在这里是可数名词,而且上下文没有特指某一只大象,所以应该用不定冠词an。

    错误7:It was a once-in-a-lifetime experience which I will never forget.
    更正:It was a once-in-a-lifetime experience that I will never forget.
    解析:这是一个定语从句的引导词错误,当先行词是experience时,定语从句的引导词更常用that而不是which。虽然which在某些情况下也可以,但在这种描述特定经历的句子中,that更常见。

    以上就是英语四级改错示例,在英语四级备考中,需要保持持续的学习和练习,不断提高自己的英语能力。
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