21st century as it did during the 20th century. The amplified warming in Arctic, in turn, directly contributes to overall global warming, as __9__well as cause changes that create impacts over the rest of the globe. __10__
答案及解析:
1.had-have
这里没有语境表明这个动作或者状态发生在过去某个时间点以前,所以用过去完成体不合适。
2.from-in
manifest something in something 意思是“在……方面表现出来”。例如:
His frustration manifested itself in his silence and inactiveness。
3.^altered-and
这里要看出并列的几个名次词组是 extend and thickness…、permafrost thawing、coastal erosion、changes in ice sheets and ice shelves、altered distribution and abundance of species,三个斜体的and并不是连接这几个并列项的,所以必须在最后一项altered distribution and abundance of species前加上并列连词and。
4.more-/
later本身已经是比较级,不用再加more。
5.so-as/since
这里要理清主从句的因果关系,从上下文看,应该说“冰层变薄”是因,“放牧驯鹿变得困难”是果,所以应该把so 改成as或since。
6.colder-warmer
文章谈的是气候变暖问题。“冬季变冷”显然是与整个文章的逻辑不符。
7.very-/
very不修饰形容词或者副词的比较级。(觉得这里把very 改为much 也没问题)
8.projections^-that
projections后面的从句是同位语从句,同位语从句的引导词that不可以省略。
9.^Arctic-the
“北极”Arctic前要加定冠词。
10.cause-causing
as well as相当于介词,其后不直接跟动词,应该是名次或动词-ing分词。