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Dear Qiubai,
I hope I'm not intruding with this letter at a time like this. I'd like to tell you how saddened we are by the news, and how deeply we feel for you in your sorrow. It was a privilege to have known your father and he will be remembered by many for a long time to come.
I hope you can find comfort in the fact that he lived to a ripe old age. You made his life such a happy one, and he was so proud of you and your splendid accomplishments. This should help relieve your sorrow a bit.
I hope that time will soon soften the blow, and leave you only cherished memories.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
亲爱的秋白:
在这个时候给你写信,希望没有打扰到你。我想告诉你,听到这个消息我们有多么难过,我们对你的悲伤深表同情。能认识你的父亲,我们十分荣幸。在今后的很长时间里,他将被许多人铭记。
你父亲活到了高龄,希望这能让你感到宽慰。你使他的生活过得那么愉快,而他又为你那么自豪,为你取得的佳绩那么骄傲。这应该有助于减轻你的痛苦。
我希望这个打击能随着时间的推移而很快减轻,只给你留下珍贵的记忆。
你真诚的,
李明
道长点评
吊唁信务必态度真诚、措辞严谨;切忌滥用华丽辞藻、询问病亡细节、触及病痛根源,以免加深对方的悲痛。内容应重在设身处地地感受对方的痛苦和悲伤,表示真挚的哀悼。
素材词汇和短语
intrude 打扰;干涉
saddened 悲伤的
sorrow 悲伤,悲痛
privilege 特别的荣幸
comfort 安慰
splendid 极好的
accomplishment 成绩
relieve 减轻
soften 减弱
blow 打击
cherish 珍藏
佳句拓展
1 We have just heard with profound sorrow the sad news.
我们刚刚听说这一噩耗,深感悲痛。
2 Although I never met your father, I had heard you and your brother speak of him so often that I felt I knew him.
尽管我从未见过你的父亲,但由于经常听到你和你弟弟谈起他,我觉得我也认识他。
3 He will be long remembered for his steadfast service to his host of friends and to the community.
他将因坚持帮助朋友和为集体服务而被长久铭记。