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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to ask about the availability of student accommodation.
I am an overseas student and will arrive at the university on September 5th. I would like to live on campus as far as possible. As I'm a light sleeper, I prefer a quiet dorm away from roads. I shall be studying for my master's degree in Medical Sciences, so it would be great if my dorm could be within walking distance of my laboratory. I would also prefer to share with other female students, preferably one who doesn't smoke.
As this will be my first time to visit the U.S., I would be grateful if you could also let me have detailed directions to the university. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
参考译文
尊敬的先生/女士:
我写信是想询问学生宿舍的情况。
我是一名海外留学生,将于9月5日抵校。我想尽可能住在校园里。因为我睡眠比较轻,所以想要一间远离马路的安静宿舍。我将攻读医学硕士学位,所以如果从宿舍步行就能到我的实验室就太好了。我还想和其他女生合住,最好她不吸烟。
这将是我第一次来美国,所以,如果您还能告诉我到学校具体怎么走,我将心存感激。若您能及时关注我的询问,我将不胜感激。
您真诚的,
李明
道长点评
一般来说,询问信会给对方带来麻烦,所以措辞要诚恳,内容要简明扼要,使对方一看就知道你所需要的帮助。
素材词汇和短语
availability 供应
student accommodation 学生宿舍
live on campus 住校
prefer 更喜欢
Medical Sciences 医学
distance 距离
laboratory 实验室
share 共享
preferably 最好是
directions(行路的)指引
prompt 及时的
佳句拓展
1 Do you provide accommodation on or off campus?
你们提供校内住宿还是校外住宿?
2 Is your accommodation coed or single-sex?
你们的宿舍是男女混合的还是男女分开的?
3 Is there a private accommodation market?
有私人住宿市场吗?