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Dear Professor Byron,

I write to submit my application for the MBA scholarship in strategic management.

I graduated in 2010 with a bachelor's degree in international finance and spent three years working in the Environmental Planning Department of the local government. My dissertation was on industrial modernization, and I published several articles in The Manager and The Journal of Strategic Management.

I believe that the advanced knowledge I would acquire from pursuingan MBA degree would put me in a strong positionto assist in the continued industrial modernization in China. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

尊敬的拜伦教授：

我给您写信提交我对于战略管理类工商管理硕士奖学金的申请。

我2010年毕业，获得了国际金融学士学位。随后我在地方政府的环境规划部门工作了三年。我的本科学位论文关于工业现代化，我还在《经理人》和《战略管理杂志》上发表了几篇文章。

我相信，通过继续攻读工商管理硕士学到的先进知识将使我处于优势，为中国工业的继续现代化尽自己的一份力量。期待能尽快收到您的回复。

您真诚的，

李明

道长点评

申请信涉及的范围颇广，如留学、奖学金、志愿者、职位等。要说明自己符合要求的原因，并力求突出自己的优势。口吻要客气得体，不卑不亢。

professor 教授

submit 提交

application 申请

MBA 工商管理硕士

environmental planning 环境规划

department 部门

government 政府

dissertation(学位)论文

industrial modernization 工业现代化

publish 发表

scholarship 奖学金

strategic management 战略管理

bachelor 学士

international finance 国际金融

article 文章

journal 杂志

advanced 先进的，高级的

knowledge 知识

acquire 获得

continued 继续的

1　I am writing to inquire about the possibility of being accepted as a graduate student with a full scholarship in your university upon my graduation.

我写信想咨询是否可以毕业后全奖就读贵校的研究生。

2　I shall be glad to furnish you with further information concerning my education, professional experience and financial situation.

我很乐意提供给您更多有关我个人的教育情况、工作经历和财务状况。

3　I would greatly appreciate it if you could forward the necessary materials and relevant information about scholarships at your earliest convenience.

如您能尽快寄给我奖学金的相关材料，我将不胜感激。