Writing 8 　［上海市高三英语二模（虹口区） ］请你以高三学生李华的署名给校长发一封电子邮件，感谢学校三年来对你的培养和教育，并向学校提出如下建议：学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的培养；学校应该丰富学生的校园生活。

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Dear Principal，

I'm greatly honored to be able to write to you as one of the Senior Three students whose graduation is just around the corner．The school，as I've felt since I entered it 3 years ago，has been devoted to cultivating and educating us students．Thank you for providing all of us with the best teaching facilities and learning environment．And I should also thank all of the qualified and devoted teachers for their love and help．And to make our school an even better one，I'd like to put forward some humble suggestions．

Firstly，I think more attention should be paid to the cultivating of students' ways of learning．The time students stay at school is limited，but knowledge is infinite．A school can't teach all the knowledge to the students，but if taught a correct and efficient way of learning，the students can pursue as much knowledge as possible in their future life．

Secondly，the school should further enrich students' campus life．Study is just one part of life．Only by taking part in different activities and dealing with different life situations can we develop a variety of life skills necessary for our social life．A successful person is more than one only with good test scores．He must also be strong-willed and intelligent in various aspects of life，the development of which needs a colorful campus life and a variety of school activities．

I really hope our school can be a more successful one and I'm looking forward to more students graduating from our school！

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua