Writing 8 　［上海市高三英语二模（虹口区） ］请你以高三学生李华的署名给校长发一封电子邮件，感谢学校三年来对你的培养和教育，并向学校提出如下建议：学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的培养；学校应该丰富学生的校园生活。

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Dear Headmaster，

I'm Li Hua from Senior 3．Since graduation is around the corner，I'm writing to you to show my gratitude as well as put forward some suggestions．

Thank you for providing us with a garden-like campus．Thank you for providing us with advanced study facilities and a prefect atmosphere of obtaining knowledge and developing both academic and social abilities．Most importantly，thank you for providing us with those capable and excellent teachers who guided us to be mature in our growth．The words of gratitude are endless to be told．

So，I really hope my school can become better and that's why this e-mail is sent．Firstly，the school teaching should pay attention to the cultivation of students' study methods．Undoubtedly，everyone in this school has excellent intellect，so proper and effective study methods really make a difference and students are sure to achieve more．Moreover，the school should enrich students' campus life．Although the school is always encouraging us to do some out-of-class activities，we often meet with many obstacles in case of the conflict between school work and after-class activities．I expect that our school will offer us more freedom and help instead of restrictions．

Dear headmaster，I will appreciate it if you can accept my suggestions．May our school be excellent forever！

Yours，

Li Hua