1--Melanie, can you help me with something? We need to finalize the account with the Mexican Embassy and, I need some advice on phrasing this letter correctly in English.
2--Sure Tracy, let me just get my laptop all set.
1--Okay, so... To Whom It May Concern, I am writing.
2--Um, Tracy? I think that' s a little too formal. I know you want to be polite but you've already made contact with them, so in English you can be more relaxed in the opening...
1--Okay, more relaxed. Got it. Hey, Sally, what' s up? It's Tracy here, just.
2--Okay Tracy, now it's too relaxed! You've still got to show some respect. How about starting with "Dear Ms. Cooper, I'm writing to confirm...?
1--Great, okay. "Dear Miss Cooper, I'm writing to confirm the final quotation for the full page back cover color advertisement you requested for the spring issue of Voila magazine".
2--That's great...
1--"The final costing, including advert design and production, comes to forty-five thousand six hundred RMB. We want payment ten working days before publication or we will cancel the ad. Thanks for..."
2--Woo, okay, back up a second, Tracy. That's too direct. Can I suggest you say, please note that final payment is due two working weeks before publication? You don't want to offend her.
1--Oops, okay. You are right. Then I can just end with "All the best, Tracy".
2--Hmmmm, maybe, but I'd play it safe and just finish with "Yours Sincerely". That's more professional.
1--Oh, Melanie, you are a life saver, thank you!
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注解：
1.phrasing措辞
2.payment付款
3.professional专业的
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译文：
1--梅勒妮，能帮我做些事吗？我们要和墨西哥大使馆确定账户，然后我需要一些建议，就是有关用英语书写规范的问题。
2--当然了，特蕾西，先让我准备好我的笔记本电脑。
1--好的，所以说，我要写给谁呢？
2--呃，特蕾西，我想这样写有些太正式了。我知道你想表现得很有礼貌，但是我们已经来往过，所以信的开头可以超微轻松一些。
1--好的，要比较轻松。知道了。嗨，莎莉，怎么了？特蕾西也正好在这里。
2--好的，特蕾西，现在放松多了吧！不过还是要表现出尊敬。以“亲爱的库伯小姐，我写信来是为了确认……”这样为开头行吗？
1--好，好的。“亲爱的库伯小姐，我写信给你是为了确认最后的定价，就是春季出版的Voila杂志封面全页的广告。
2--这样写很好……
1--最后的花费，包括广告定价和生产，总共有45600。我们希望在杂志出版的十个工作日之前收到付款，没收到的话，我们会取消广告。谢谢……”
2--哇，好的，在修改一下，特蕾西。这样太直接了。如果你不想冒犯的话，我可以这样说么：“请注意，最后的付款须要在杂志出版的两个工作周之前支付”。
1--哎呀，好的。你是对的。然后我只要以“一切都好，特蕾西”结尾就行了。
2--嗯，也许吧。但是保险起见吧，用“你的真诚的”，会显得更专业些。
1--哦，梅勒妮，你真是我的救星，谢谢啦！
2--Sure Tracy, let me just get my laptop all set.
1--Okay, so... To Whom It May Concern, I am writing.
2--Um, Tracy? I think that' s a little too formal. I know you want to be polite but you've already made contact with them, so in English you can be more relaxed in the opening...
1--Okay, more relaxed. Got it. Hey, Sally, what' s up? It's Tracy here, just.
2--Okay Tracy, now it's too relaxed! You've still got to show some respect. How about starting with "Dear Ms. Cooper, I'm writing to confirm...?
1--Great, okay. "Dear Miss Cooper, I'm writing to confirm the final quotation for the full page back cover color advertisement you requested for the spring issue of Voila magazine".
2--That's great...
1--"The final costing, including advert design and production, comes to forty-five thousand six hundred RMB. We want payment ten working days before publication or we will cancel the ad. Thanks for..."
2--Woo, okay, back up a second, Tracy. That's too direct. Can I suggest you say, please note that final payment is due two working weeks before publication? You don't want to offend her.
1--Oops, okay. You are right. Then I can just end with "All the best, Tracy".
2--Hmmmm, maybe, but I'd play it safe and just finish with "Yours Sincerely". That's more professional.
1--Oh, Melanie, you are a life saver, thank you!
===================================
注解：
1.phrasing措辞
2.payment付款
3.professional专业的
===================================
译文：
1--梅勒妮，能帮我做些事吗？我们要和墨西哥大使馆确定账户，然后我需要一些建议，就是有关用英语书写规范的问题。
2--当然了，特蕾西，先让我准备好我的笔记本电脑。
1--好的，所以说，我要写给谁呢？
2--呃，特蕾西，我想这样写有些太正式了。我知道你想表现得很有礼貌，但是我们已经来往过，所以信的开头可以超微轻松一些。
1--好的，要比较轻松。知道了。嗨，莎莉，怎么了？特蕾西也正好在这里。
2--好的，特蕾西，现在放松多了吧！不过还是要表现出尊敬。以“亲爱的库伯小姐，我写信来是为了确认……”这样为开头行吗？
1--好，好的。“亲爱的库伯小姐，我写信给你是为了确认最后的定价，就是春季出版的Voila杂志封面全页的广告。
2--这样写很好……
1--最后的花费，包括广告定价和生产，总共有45600。我们希望在杂志出版的十个工作日之前收到付款，没收到的话，我们会取消广告。谢谢……”
2--哇，好的，在修改一下，特蕾西。这样太直接了。如果你不想冒犯的话，我可以这样说么：“请注意，最后的付款须要在杂志出版的两个工作周之前支付”。
1--哎呀，好的。你是对的。然后我只要以“一切都好，特蕾西”结尾就行了。
2--嗯，也许吧。但是保险起见吧，用“你的真诚的”，会显得更专业些。
1--哦，梅勒妮，你真是我的救星，谢谢啦！
