2--It was good overall. But you need to make some small changes.
 
1--What would you suggest?
 
2--I would put the production information before the cost so that it sounds justified.
 
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注解：
 
1.presentation提供；外观；赠送(仪式)；报告；表演   
2.overall总体的  
3.justified证明有理由的，合理的
 
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译文：
 
1--我刚做的简报需要一些意见。
2--它整体来讲是好的。不过你还需要做一些小小的更改。
1--你建议怎么做呢?
2--我会把产品介绍放在价格之前，让它听起来比较合理一点。