[误] In his eyes, her beauty would make fishes sink, wild geese fall, moon an flowers hide for shame.

[正] In his eyes, her beauty would put the flowers to shame.

注：“沉鱼落雁，闭月羞花”典出我国古代的四大美女，直译出来大多数外国人难以理解，所以不如选择一个他们容易理解的词，而不必重复。