Have you had a chance to look over the handout for my presentation?
你有没有看过我演讲的讲义?
Yes, Mark.
看过了，马克。
And I have some questions about the content.
关于内容，我有一些问题。
Really?
是吗?
Do you think I need to adjust the content of the presentation?
你认为我需要调整演讲的内容吗?
A little.
一点点。
For instance, I don't think the example you give in the introduction is really relevant...
例如，我认为在介绍时你给出的例子并不相关…
...and the complexity of the last two sections of the presentation...
…演讲稿最后两部分的复杂性…
...may be too much to explain in the allotted time for this presentation.
…对于这个演讲而言，在规定的时间内，解释它需要花费太多时间。
I guess I have a lot more work to do on the structure of the whole presentation.
我想对于整个演讲结构，我还有很多工作要做。
Maybe after you work on it more, you can practice in front of me.
或许在你再在上面下点儿功夫之后，你可以在我面前练习。
Great!
太好了!
You can tell me if I use good eye contact or have distracting mannerisms.
你可以告诉我，我是否注意和听众的眼神交流或是否慌乱无措。
