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To Whom It May Concern,
I recently bought a novel from your bookstore. I like the book but the shopping experience is quite annoying.
I would like to register my dissatisfaction with the service I received at your bookstore. I asked a salesclerk where to find the novel. But he kept chatting with his colleague and ignored me completely. I finally found the book myself and wondered whether I was allowed to remove the plastic cover to look inside the book. But the salesclerk was so rude to me that I almost decided not to buy the book.
As a regular customer, I sincerely hope your bookstore could take my complaint seriously and make every effortto improve your service. Thanks for your time. I look forward to your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
致有关人士:
最近我在贵书店买了一本小说。我喜欢这本书,但这次购物经历让人很恼火。
我想正式表达我对贵书店所提供服务的不满。我问一个店员在哪里能找到这本小说。但他一直在跟同事聊天,根本不理我。最后我自己找到了,想知道能不能打开塑封看看书里面。但这个店员对我态度很粗暴,我当时差点就决定不买了。
作为贵店的常客,我真心希望你们能认真对待我的投诉并尽一切努力改善你们的服务。谢谢您抽出时间阅读我的邮件。盼早日回复。
您真诚的,
李明
道长点评
投诉信的首段应说明写信人写本信的目的和要求,次段应针对所投诉问题向收信人提出改进建议,末段应表示希望尽快得到满意的答复。
素材词汇和短语
novel 小说
bookstore 书店
annoying 令人恼火的
register 正式表达
dissatisfaction 不满
salesclerk 店员
chat 聊天
colleague 同事
ignore 不理睬
remove 去掉
plastic 塑料的
rude 粗暴的
regular customer 常客
佳句拓展
1 I look forward to a day when we could really enjoy a more efficient service from your bookstore.
期待有一天我们在贵店能真正享受到更高效的服务。
2 Your effort to provide good services will be highly appreciated by all.
所有人都会非常感谢你们努力提供优质的服务。
3 I would like to draw your attention to this issue.
我想让您关注这个问题。